Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Theoretical Information

Though I have cited Culham (2003) previously, a little background information on the Traits has never hurt. 

Below is an overview of the Traits.  Based on my pre-assessment data (and time constraint), I focused on sentence fluency, word choice and conventions.  These posed as the highest needs for this particular group of students.


6 + 1 Traits Overview
Ideas
Ideas make up the content of the piece of writing, otherwise known as the heart of the message.
Organization
Organization is the internal structure of the piece, the thread of meaning, the logical pattern of the ideas.
Voice
Voice is the soul of the piece.  It’s what makes the writer’s style singular, as his or her feelings and convictions come out through the words.
Word Choice
Word choice is at its best when it includes the use of rich, colorful, precise language that moves and enlightens the reader.
Sentence Fluency
Sentence fluency is the flow of the language, the sound of word patterns- the way the writing plays to the ear, not just the eye.
Conventions
Conventions represent the piece’s level of correctness- the extent to which the writer uses grammar and mechanics with precision.
+1 Presentation
Presentation zeros in on the form and layout- how please the piece is to the eye.
(Culham, 2003, p. 11-12).

Because my students are flexibly grouped, and the fact that I could find little research on strategies to utilize with higher-ability and gifted students.  Additionally, all the research done on the Six Traits showed improvements amongst lower achieving students and not so much with the higher-achieving students.

Below are the resources that I've collected to help mold my action research model into what it is today:


Albertson, L. R., & Billingsley, F. F. (2001).  Using Strategy Instruction and Self-Regulation to Improve Gifted Students’ Creative Writing.  Journal of Secondary Gifted Education, 12(2), 90.

Coe, M., Hanita, M., Nishioka, V. & Smiley, R.  (2011).  An Investigation of the Impact of the 6 + 1 Trait Writing Model on Grade 5 Student Writing Achievement.  United States Department of Education.

Culham, R.  (2003).  6 + 1 Traits of writing: The complete guide grades 3 and up.  Portland, OR: Northwest Regional Educational Laboratory.

DeJarnette, N. K. (2008).  Effects of the 6 + 1 Trait Writing Model on Student Writing Achievement.  Liberty University: College of Education.

Diederich, P. B.  (1974).  Measuring growth in english.  Urbana, IL: National Council Teachers of English.

Flyte-Rettler, J. L. (2004).  Improving Fourth Grade Students’ Writing Skills with 6 + 1 Traits of Writing, Graphic Organizers, and Writer’s Workshop.  Oshkosh, WI: University of Wisconsin.

Higgins, B., Miller, M., & Wegmann, S.  (2006).  Teaching to the test…not!  Balancing best practice and testing requirements in writing.  Reading Teacher, 60(4), 310-319.  doi: 10.1598/RT.60.4.1.

Mertler, C. A.  (2012).  Action research: Improving schools and empowering educators. Thousand Oaks, CA: Sage.

Wearmouth, J., Berryman, M., & Whittle, L. (2011). 'Shoot for the moon!' Students' identities as writers in the context of the classroom. British Journal of Special Education, 38(2), 92-99. doi:10.1111/j.1467-8578.2011.00502.x

Conventions Update

My one conventions participant did not finish his lesson, so below is a description of the lesson itself.  It was an application of the APLUS editing technique that he previously learned.  (This particular participant moves at a snails pace in any type of activity we are completing, especially writing).

Word Choice Update

This week, students worked on improving their dialogue.  More specifically, students focused on not overusing the word "said."  After the lesson introduction, I read aloud Stellaluna and students focused on the different words the author used in place of said.  Oftentimes, I feel like I take read-alouds for granted, but my kids really enjoyed this lesson and I think it had a lot to do with the book we read aloud.

 
Students then applied the skill after we finished instruction, modeling and a read aloud.
 
 
Most students did well, however, I had a few students that did not write the amount of required sentences.  It was not that they didn't understand the lesson.

Sentence Fluency Update

This week, my sentence fluency group worked on creating "high-five" sentences, in which they were instructed on creating sentences with nouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, and prepositional phrases.  Each part of speech was represented by a finger on their hands.

Many of my students are visual learners, so they were successful with this because this was a graphic organizer that would always be with them!
 

You can see from the chart that many were successful.  (The blank numbers are students not participating in the sentence fluency group).


Above is a student sample.  This student worked really hard on her sentences when applying the skills on her own. 
 
The next (and final) lesson I will be doing is from the sixth grade book, as I want to see how they respond with something higher level.

Weekly Reflection

I don't know if I will ever feel like I'm fully on track or "finished."  I often feel like these terms are overused!  I guess I would feel better about my progress with collecting data, had we not been off for a grand total of 22 days and a few hour delays thrown in there. 

My participants have been more than helpful with my research process and I'm happy to say that many of them have demonstrated gains.  However, I cannot speak too soon, as I've not given the post assessment yet, nor have my kids taken their state testing assessment yet.  I want so badly for my writers to succeed, but I understand now that was not the case.  I am finishing a research project that I implemented within my classroom that will hopefully aid others in making decisions within their classrooms.  I think that's a pretty big feat.

This week I'm grateful.  I'm terrified as to how things will turn out (for both myself and my students), but I'm grateful for the simple fact that I was able to do this with my particular group of kids.

Happy blogging,

Emily

Thursday, March 13, 2014

Sentence Fluency Updates

My largest group is my Sentence Fluency birds.  Below is the pre-assessment and you can really see that the majority of my higher-functioning students struggle with sentence fluency (I expected this early on).

 
Now, here is the mid-research assessment that I had the students complete.  Some of their stories turned out pretty great they're going to use them for their portfolios.
 
 
Most of the students made gains, however, I did have a couple that haven't.  These students didn't surprise me in their non-gain, so I need to focus more closely on them and be more deliberate.

Below is a student sample about Brandon Phillips- the Reds baseball player and I just had to post this because I love him as much as my student here does! :)

 

Word Choice Updates

 The Word Choice group has also made some gains. 
 
Above is the pre-assessment for the Word Choice group.  Please pay close attention to the last number of students, as above is the entire group.

Below are the students during their mid-research application practice.